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Will it be this way always?

Your fault
Time and again
How can it be
So many years
So many others
Why

I hate it

Because of you
That simple act
The one that brings pleasure
Gives most living creatures peace
Only fills me with guilt
Another gift from you
Its been eleven years

Yet you still take from me
Will it be this way always?

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  • ravenofdarkness
    September 10, 2009
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    ah love it sis hope you are well


    • Despairkitty
      November 12, 2009
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      Thanks raven. I have just been lost latley. Maybe some good poetry will come of it.


  • Haunted Doll
    August 2, 2009

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    yay!! you're back! i missed your writing this was so mysterious, perhaps as elusive as the act of letting go and forgetting. frontal labodamis for all us broken hearted zombies lol ya i'm tired


    • Despairkitty
      November 12, 2009
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      I am trying to write. It has been hard latley. But when I am sad and depressed it usually brings out poetry. let the good times roll.