To contain you
Would be heavenly
Yet, unattainable,
You lay clear above me,
Caressing me at your will
Drenched seduction
Pours through me,
Spilling me into thought
And putting me out
Like an eclipse
A contest entry
- Sex with the Universe by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
450 points, ended August 16, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Really wonderful poetry.. so appreciated in this contest.. thank you.
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A feeling i know only too well!!!
This is a wonderful write my friend,
All the best to you in the contest,
good to see you writing again.
Ken
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thanks for the support...
it's nice running into a friendly face
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This is one of my favourite entries in the contest.
I've read through them all and yet lingered on this one; with so few words you've summed it all up.
I especially like the second stanza. Powerful with great imagery.
Good luck in the contest!
~Sparrow
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That was incredible the image was very intense and i can see every smooth and beautiful picture that you deliver in this poem you are efoortless and it comes across very suave....amazing write...keep it up...much <3...scars.
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