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kiss.


Eyes softer than a broken heart
beating silently as the world is breaking,
you slowly close the cracks between my cynical eyes,
and my hope-
as

your lips- gentler than a whisper
but driven with the desire to speak
- to someone- make me feel cared for.
You kiss by the stopwatch-

with cars and traffic lights.
we are in the middle of a roundabout
and cannot stand still until
i've died from lonliness,

disintegrated from lying
double-bed and single-bedded.

- i know you
but
i'm still waiting.

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hrmmm been a while. blaaah. i guess you could say i'm getting there...

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