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We Send Out Light That Lives

This sleepy little galaxy,
lost in the milieu of a billion others,
is filled with song and the finite
thrum of human hearts.

This glow-in-the-dark Milky Way,
whose pin-wheel arms
are spun with satin stars,
emits Mozart from its crevices.

This nondescript spiral,
axled upon a super-massive black-hole,
frisbees across the universe,
curving it with the maths of Einstein.

Space travelers are we all,
learning the gravitation-crawl.

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  • Emmyb gold member
    October 14
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    Great!!


    • A60sMan
      October 14
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      My precious jewel receives a comment!

      I'm going to re-submit this piece somewhere as a pre-write. It's been annoying getting no feedback on it before now. But, knowing that it brought you enjoyment, Emma, makes it all the sweeter. :-)

      Brian