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The Great Wall of China

I am the Great Wall of China
Both magnificent and dull.
Built to keep the world at a distance
An attempt to keep the peace within

And when the intruders crawl over
For surely enough, they will
I will have a disturbance
And I will begin fall

But soon my soul will stand
And beat the huns away
And I will heal
And I will be stronger

For I am the Great Wall of China
Built to keep the peace within
and the rest of the world
out.

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  • AmoreEMorte
    August 2

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    I like this one, I do. The only part that tripped me up was "But soon my soul stand" it kind of made me pause...but I still like it. China <3 ;-;