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Right

The warm summer sun rekindles old thoughts,
as I become more confident in where I am,
life is falling into place,
hope is always there.

No one's ruining this life of mine,
no one's going to take away my smile,
and as I push forward,
everything feels right.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    August 10

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    A WONDERFUL POEM OF HOPE!!!!

    Your words are full of hope and faith! It is good to keep both close in this crazy world. 's


  • corrupt angel
    August 5

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    Oh lovely write. It's so optimistic that it makes me smile.

    "The warm summer sun rekindles old thoughts."

    I loved that opening line. It caught my attention quick. I just loved the hopefulness of this entire piece. Great write!