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Whoa to the People


Whoa to the people
who make money and profit
from those less fortunate.
They inhale from worldly castles
and preach from silken pulpits.
while claiming to do God’s will.
They mock and scold
and profess to be righteous
while seeking public acclaim.
They prostrate themselves
with money and possessions
accrued from selfish ideals.



Whoa to the people
who steal from the blind man
and kick at a beleaguered face.
Whose arrogance and mordacity 
looks down in disgusted repulsion
to the misfortunes of honest men.
Whose code of ethical reform
fits only their twisted agendas
and vulgates for personal gain. 
Whose audacity preaches good will
to men yet castrates a world theater
with volleys of putrid acidic lies 


Whoa to the people
who forget what the Book says
“The meek shall inherit the earth”
For they will use your grave
as  their triumphant urinal
and spit upon your name.
For they will use your skull
as a footstool and your bones
as implements of daily tasks.
For they will use your blood
as their wine and your soul
  will feed their internal flame. 

















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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 10
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    awesome

    dearest Charley,
    You have written such a powerful poem here. The emotions felt while reading your words, were extremely powerful, so I must agree with the other comments left on your poem.
    The third stanza really pulled me in, but these words from that stanza really goose bumped my skin....

    For they will use your grave
    as their triumphant urinal
    and spit upon your name.
    For they will use your skull
    as a footstool and your bones
    as implements of daily tasks.
    For they will use your blood
    as their wine and your soul
    will feed their internal flame.....

    Awesome my friend, just awesome.
    Thank you for sharing your words with us, and as always, you have been a pleasure to read
    Much love and happiness to you
    Your AP Angel




    • ckwriter69
      November 11
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      Thanks Angel, it's always wonderful to read your comments. You are and always will be a dear and close friend. May love and happiness find you whereever you go.


  • Cynthia
    August 29

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    Excellent

    CK, what a fantastic piece of poetry.
    WOW!!!!!
    I am truly stunned by this write.
    Well done.

    Keep up with the great work.
    Keep on penning.
    Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.

    *S* Cynthia

  • Wow this was very powerful.

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