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First She is Naked...


then you heap shiny, glittering things on her...



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  • individuality gold member
    August 1

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    like bottle tops and old silver keys, perhaps some wire wool too, and mmm, let me think, what else is shiny, some tin foil rolled into small balls, some chocolate wrappers, eat the chocolate first though, don't let her get a sniff of it. a good one liner.


    • wbiro gold member
      August 1
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      barbed-wire is shiny... and it glitters...


  • TheLyricsArePoetry gold member
    August 1

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    glittering things and pom-poms and feathers and ribbons and petals and jewels and rainbows and shit? that sure does sound lovely. not sure about the naked part but the rest sounds like heaven


    • wbiro gold member
      August 1
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      yes, you're quit right- it usually happens in the other way around (if there is also that certain mutual feeling present), but that would make for a less intriguing title and mental image... lol and in this one, I can envision smiles all around...


  • paulcreates silver member
    August 1
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    I like decorating Christmas tree ornaments too.

    • wbiro gold member
      August 1
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      but does you tree smile back at you? lol

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