reflections of a life to come
reflections of what has been
beside the misty pond
I oft but sit and dream
I know my time is precious
my life a speck on earth
do I dare to be all I can
just what is my life worth
how many have sat here before
how many shared this scene
pondering what is to come
their lives and all their dreams
so as I sit and ponder
as I sit and dream
I ask that God in heaven
take my hand
and lovingly
show me.
Author notes
I think the pic is quiet beautiful and subtle and tried to keep my poem the same.
Hope it works.
A contest entry
- Dreamer by Poetic Tasha.
1500 points, ended August 8, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Appreciate your feelings whilst reading this one. Thank you
Comments
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flows beautifully and indeed serenely as mentioned in a previous comment,
most wonderful take on the prompt, thank you so much for taking the time to enter
best of luck to you!
Tasha
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This was very well done, and I often wonder too, what my life is about, I wonder why Im here, I dont feel like anything is missing per-say but I feel I could be doing more. This was my fav part as I feel the sam way! " do I dare to be all I can
just what is my life worth " -
Lovely and serene. Great work poet!
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this is peace-ful... i like it alot.. it makes me want to go sit and ponder..
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