Feet that walked on whisper wings
A voice to play my heart strings
You filled my every waking hour
A love that had magical power
My happy feet danced around
Tapping to your loved filled sound
Blinded by the thought of you
Thinking that your heart was true
Illusions of love so rare
In this I found despair
For as I watched with saddened eyes
I spied to my surprise
Another who walks on whisper wings
Captured by the voice that plays heart strings
No longer to walk on whisper wings
No voice to play my heart strings
Can I dance
No not I
My feet have but a saddened sigh!
Author notes
I found this a challenge, Thank you I needed one, have not been on AP for a little while.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE! Guilty feet have got no rythmn by DarkShard.
700 points, ended August 29, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Appreciate your feelings whilst reading this one. Thank you
Comments
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'Tapping to your loved filled sound
Blinded by the thought of you
Thinking that your heart was true'
that was my favorite line this was great thankyou and sorry for the delay in judging
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Sad and wistful, but beautifully expressed. Bravo!
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what great rhyming!! At times rhyming can get cliche'...finding unusual combinations helps breathe a different energy into the format!! great job here...thanks for sharing. peace, kp
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Thank you
I think this is the quickest comment I've ever had you must be right on the ball.
I appreciate your comments . I love rhyme that tell a story. Shall check out your poetry shortly.
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