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Fading into mist

Your presence still lingers here,

I'll return for you

Awaiting the day that you return for me.

 

I can't admit your gone.

 

My once pleasent dreams you stole,

Abandoned by the shore

The only way in, the only way out.

 

I wont admit your gone.

 

White horses crash upon the gold,

I'll search the debries

Stand amongst the spray.

 

I can't let you go.

 

I can see the greenland on the other side,

But I'll wait in our cave,

Ever pacing this world.

 

I wont let you go.

 

Its becoming a faded memory,

But i'm bound by the life you left behind

The sun is even dieing.

 

Your leaving me...

 

I've bitten back tears,

For too many years

I tried to hard to hold on.

 

...Fading...

 

I can't stay waiting,

I'm not made of youth

Got to keep walking on...

 

Your gone.

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prompt: http://www.bg-sc.com/games/illusions/7horses.jpg
It's a differnet look on it i know however i find it works well i want to know what you think.

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  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    August 6

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    I think that it's a very personified poem which isn't bad it'sgood in an amazing way. The horse is more a human in this piece and less of a horse. It's a beautiful look on the picture well done! Brav