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What makes a child cry

None will ever understand
what makes a child cry
but if you look just hard enough
you will find the answers why.

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  • Angelflower
    August 16
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    Short and intruiging. I like it!


  • DesolatELifE
    August 8

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    Nice little verse. I don't agree, since I was a child once, and I'm pretty sure most other people were, so it's likely that at least some of them remember what made them cry. Good stuff.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 2
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    very catchy


  • glitterydoom
    August 1
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    ooh i like it. short but thought inspiring.

    ^_^

  • Interesting write short but sweet, it makes you think

  • Interesting write short but sweet, it makes you think

  • simple, to the point, kinda cute in a way.

    i like ^_^ maybe a little too short, but i do like ^_^ <3

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