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Seek

Never know

Or understand

Where to go

Or if I can

The many twists

Many turns

All the risks

And concerns

Wanting needing

Purpose real

All I'm feeling

May reveal

Hesitation

Quite unsure

My destination

If to occur

Journey onward

Feelings lead

Sometimes flounder

Always believe

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  • The Accidental Poet
    August 2

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    This is the first I've seen of this style of poetry (I'm a novice, so please forgive me) and i like it, the short verses have a big impact. I like the message 'always believe', it offers hope. I'll be coming back to this page often.


  • EvansV
    August 2
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    awsome piece of work

    your work flows nicely and i love this one


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    August 1

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    twists and turns
    path unsure
    inner voice
    should not ignore.

    one stanza of a poem I wrote years ago

    when you quiet mind, and keep still, you can feel inner voice in stillness, the confusion of cluttered thoughts, when we remove the clutter the deception disappears and you find that you were always in the light.

    I really love this
    God bless you my friend...


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    August 1

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    EXCELLENCE
    this is a very fine piece of work, nice tight rhythm, superb choice of language. very evvoccative
    bravo
    T


  • Patpowers silver member
    August 1

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    Thank you Vic! Fine expressive work in this poem of yours. Keep on penning some more inspiring work in the future!

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