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Sea Storm

I looked out over the water, and saw the golden waved fade away it's glow vanishing, and it melted into a still carpet of grey.
I heard a rumble and saw a flash the storm was coming, the sky lit up by the flash of electricity that changed the grey clouds to white.
The water glowed silver and then died down to Black.
The rumble cam again chaced by a flash. sending me trebling to my knees.

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