Yesterday:
Not the best, not the worst.
We fought, but made up.
Stayed, but left.
I'm sorry.
Today:
Together all day.
Bad feelings inside, though.
Forgot them and focused on you.
Hope you enjoyed it.
Tomorrow:
I didn't see you, but you saw me.
Who knew it would happen?
I'm sorry for not saying good bye.
I hope you know, I love you.
Always spend today with those you love,
For you have no clue what will happen tomorrow.
Author notes
Random... Meh I'm not sure how well it compares to the others (Probably pretty bad. XD) Not one of my favorites. But I wasn't really writing like I normally do :/ but I didn't want to reserve it and take a week to write it, so I mostly focused on the point. >.< So yeah...hopefully you liked it. ^^""
Enjoy, if you can.
Background: black and white is death and purity, red is blood and love. idk, hopefully it works with the poem.
A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt III by crivanea.
400 points, ended August 1, 9 entries
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Thanks for the note
I think all poems can be improved because there is no perfection in poetry I like the overall message in this write.. Quite sad with some well worded lines
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