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Once Upon A Time

As the clock ticks, the memories
fly through my fucking mind
like flipping pages from a book
one without a happily ever after

Flip right to that page, yeah
that's the one, see the girl
with the smile and a heart
now skip ahead to chapter nine

See that girl, now she's changed
no smile, no heart, somewhere
amongst the pages they were stolen
by a man who called himself Love

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  • Antebellum
    August 1
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    love the language/ word choice here.
    wonderful write.
    thank you for taking the time to enter,
    good luck


  • PinkeyPromise
    August 1

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    this is sad. but i like the way u used a book to discribe it. Great write

    xoxoxo
    ~Mask

  • Ah..how hard is the life and how hard are the truths of life sometimes..you have captured the truths in the words...very sttrong words..and poetry as well..well done...