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love or lust?

once more you've got me under your spell,
you have me convinced that what you want
out of this relationship, is my love, but
everyone else is telling me you just want lust.

you know that i care about you, so you know
that when you use the "do it for me" or the
"if you loved me the you would...." lines,
that i will cave oh too quickly to whatever you want.

whenever i try to walk away you grab on tightly,
unwilling to let go of your extremely tight grasp of me.
i tried to move on, but that would mean you have lost,
it would mean this game that you have shaped my life into
would once more be mine, i would be the final round of the game.

i love the uncertainty of waking up in the morning
because if i don't wake up, what is the worst that can happen?
i won't be here, but that won't matter to you after you find
someone who is more willing to do exactly what you want.

yes i want a meaningful passion-filled relationship with you,
but you just want someone you can hump and dump.
i can't be your friend with benefits anymore, because your games
are really beginning to kill me.

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  • this poem just pours honesty. and god to i love poems that i can relatte to, they make htem so much more meaningful, but friends wiht benefits sucks, dont do it unless yu know there is a possiblity of a future, the whole booty call thing jsut doesnt cut it and from experience, no one should have to deal with that

  • I love the honesty of the words and the logic which are informal yet very stronglly knitted in the words ,are very strong..well done...