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I walk through the doors, and i see your face
and I pretend to not read it
but I know what it's saying.
Sadness has come upon you,
like it's been my best friend since you left
and although I hoped for this to happen,
I only feel a little satisfaction.

You left me with no answers,
You left me cold and to cry
Ever since then I've been so alone
I feel resentment,
And I can't get rid of this hatred.

I've been wishing you hell since the end,
because it's the only thing I've ever felt since.
You walked away from me as happy as you can be
And I wondered, did I ever even mean anything?
I wanted you to feel alone,
I wanted you to feel unwanted and forgotten
I wanted you to feel the way you've been making me feel.

Now I see you, alone and miserable
And now I'm wondering, why aren't I glad that you aren't feeling alive?
I've been longing to see the day where you have fallen
but I realized the love I feel for you is much stronger then the hate.

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  • MJ Forgives
    August 1

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    Wow cool poem. I really liked it. I can relate to this in a way though. I hope you wonderful in that contest.