The evil of your wanting without meaning,
you think my being is quite amusing.
The taking of what is not yours,
the tears of my soul pours and pours.
Now visions of you haunt my mind,
peace and sanity I can not find.
You haunt my sleep,
with a never ending weep.
The light within my heart was shown,
you took it all for you to own.
Who are you to hurt me deeply,
I ask of you ever so meekly.
The visions swirl and questions raised,
my life is now forever phased.
Why are women so vulnerable,
why do some men think this is tolerable.
For I am small and deeply feminine,
and still you have hurt me so deep within.
Now you go to jail,
and finally the good will prevail.
Sorry to say,
you will finally pay.
What did you think
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while reading this...it was almost as if I could feel the venom of your words being spoken to or about this someone...your peice here...is wonderful. it is a very sad state how women can be so easily tricked or fooled by the opposite gender. I am deeply sorry you had to be hurt so to feel such pain and emotion that I felt while reading this. you are a wonderful woman and have so much to say, it means so much to many for you to share your words. i know i greatly appreciate it. thank you for being who you are, and sharing your experiences with many through your beautiful words. ♥ tearrsofthemoon
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This is another great poem, every emotional and powerful. Unfortunately, some still don't consider women equal to men. I congratulate you for creating justice in this poem.
Take care,
Nela
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The ignorance of some men is hurting the second most wonderful gift God gave this world-woman. May you find the love you truely deserve.
This poem is full of saddness and pain,the poetic justice is hopefully those that conduct themselves in this manner will eventually pay for the hurt they create.
Bless you young lady.
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SO SAD!!!
Oh my dear friend
People do hurt us, find our hearts and pierce them with pain and heartache. 
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Bountiful~Wise...
Great emotion and suffering "Sorry to Say" ~ painted with an impressive rhythm in poetic expression ~ the fall of a relationship. Wise poetic voice sung it clearly.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Humm...this is what the life makes sometimes...speechless I am...great poetry though...I shall pray for the peace and harmony in your life..my friend...thanks for sharing..
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