I didn't mean for this to happen
but when you spoke such sweet words
wonderful things, its true
that I have never heard
I believed what you said
and took in that sweet kiss
slightly afraid if I said no
indeed it'd be a miss
I didn't mean to have these feelings
especially for you
your the one who is off limits
this guilt I feel is much too new
I'm the one who doesn't do this
I follow the rules I lay
but for you I'd break them all
for another night, I may
I liked your hands upon my skin
and your lips upon mine
your breath on my neck
loves disquise is so divine
But I'm the one who doesn't do this
I follow the rules I lay
but for you, I'd break them all
for another night, I may
I wouldn't turn back, those hands of time
though this guilt will eat me alive
for your the one, I should'nt have let in
and now it feels I'm living a lie
I don't regret, not at all
but maybe its best we say goodbye
for your the one, I shouldn't have
you know thats true, we can't deny
And darling you know why
I'm saying this my friend
because what happened on that wonderful night
can never happen again
Author notes
Urgh... personal and not personal all at the same time.
Please tell me what you think
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hi. i went on the list of people online and you were on there and i picked you because i am in love with candian tv (i looooove degrassi). i really liked this poem. i liked how i could understand it, first off (all my friends write prose). i also like the rhyming. i love rhyme. i personally suck at writing but i love to read. and i really liked this.
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Very sentimental and touching here, remembering the moments that you and that person have shared, the feelings on this are very soft and delicate yet fighting the pain not to bleed too much...
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I read this before but I didn't have time to comment. I agree with not having regrets, yet realizing that it can't happen again because it mean something different to different people. I write SO many 'personal but not personal' poems
It gives a poem alot of strength much of the time when you put your personal emotions into it too, but I know you know that!!
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i see where your coming from. im in a similar position right now... its hard to decide wat to do. i feel for you i really do. idk i think a decision like that is hard for everyone. i kno its hard for me.
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Urgh! and the situation sucks!!! This is definitely one of the hardest decisions I've ever had to make in life. IDK what to do.
Thank you for reading and commenting, I will certainly return the favor.
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Rather metaphoric. It was very packed with emotions. Out of all the "song poems", I liked the coarse the best. It was catchy, repetitive in the sense that it's an enchanting chant. A poem written by many facits of the autor's being.
As far as lines that stand out in this poem, their are several. "Love's disguise is so divine." That line flowed wonderfully with a slitht bit of alliteration.
"I'd follow the rules I lay, but for you I'd break them all." This is where the poem takes a shift in direction, really exposing deep emotion.
This poem ends on a very straight forward tone. Great allegorical poem, it does show your emotions wdll.
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