You hide away,
scared to say,
what has been standing in your way.
The mystery of you will be kept,
no one understanding how you have wept.
You have visions in your minds eye,
without true understanding of how or why.
You can not hide forever,
you will have to eventually endeavor.
Show yourself to me,
so I may see,
what a good person you can be.
Trust in me,
so you may see,
the wonderful person I can be.
I will hold you strong and stand you tall,
all you'll ever have to do is call.
Here I am with a listening ear,
fighting away all your fear.
Here I am,
do you think you can?
What did you think
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Nice...
I love the flow to this... Good job.
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I really love your writing...it is always so touching...so beautiful. This write is just as beautiful asall the rest. I can see the relationship between the two people in this peice, and feel the love and compassion the one has for the other. Trusting another is one of the hardest things to do. You have capture so much emotion here. Great job as always. Love & care; ♥ tearrsofthemoon
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I wish I was himm..Does he realize that he is fortunate to acquire your affection??..This poemis so soft...eloquent..beautifull, to the core..you have talent..I prefer free verse, yet I enjoy your rhyming pattern..so nice,,...Take a bow..you deserve it..I enjoyed this so much..good for you
John
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Awesome
Oh but for the mystery of that someone ... special?!-
I really find this write an interesting piece to comprehend.I have read it three times ,each time arriving at a different preception and asking myself, this guy must be crazy not to be knocking down your door! I sure hope he reads it...
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Everyone would like a fried like this, a lovely poem
David
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Oh, I love this one, too. It's so well-written and thought provoking, with an amazing flow. Gaining someone's trust is very hard, but it's something worth trying. The line I loved the most is:
'The mystery of you will be kept,
no one understanding how you have wept.'
Bravo
Nela
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TOUCHES DEEPLY!!!!
This is what we all need, a person who will give of themselves , their time, their understanding and care, and we can give the same in return.
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Wise-Wonderful...
An invitation to new living of mind and soul... "Here I Am" glows.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Here I Am".
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Humm..I don't know to whome you are inviting..but it is so intimately written..it looks that you addressed to me...lol...sigh...
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