Is it bad to say I miss you?
The touch of your soft lips.
Small tingles from your finger tips.
Is it bad to say I miss you?
With all the distance that we shared
That smile to show you still cared.
Is it bad to say I miss you?
With all the poems that you read
The late nights you’d hold me in the bed.
Is it bad to say I miss you?
Because the ending was the worst for me
Hurting you was plain to see.
Is it bad to say I miss you?
Or that I want you back
that I’ve even gotten life on track.
Is it bad to say I miss you?
The late night calls you used to make
And all the photos we used to take.
Is it bad to say I miss you?
That my love is still there
Or do you even care?
Is it bad to say I miss you?
That I’m sorry for all I’ve done
And to be without you is no fun.
Author notes
what more can I say?
Please tell me what you think
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i think i understand how you feel. sometimes i feel like when you miss someone the best thing is to put them out of your life enirely. and sometimes you dont care how much it hurts, and despite the pain you just wana be around that person. even if they dont feel that way back. i also really liked the format of this because the repetition of the question adds a lot of dramatic effect. i like this =]
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That was great
this was so good that there is not a good enough word to explain it. But it was beautiful and it reminds me of times in my life. Excellent poem.
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