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Electronic

The beat pulses to me, as my heart keeps time.
A Spiral then a Leap, Up and Over, Down and Around, A Jump then a Freeze.
The music comes to it's climax and i begin to fly across the stage.
The music end's and Electronic Pulse i freeze in the final move.
I hear the cheers, i hear the claps, I stand for the final bow.

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