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Emptiness/Confused

Spoken words,
Yet still unspoken.
Thoughtful minds,
Yet still empty- minded.
You see me,
Yet I remain unseen.
Soft and pleasant,
Yet still in pain.
There is screaming,
Yet the silence continues.
Everything is bright,
Yet the darkness surrounds us.
The moon shines brightly in the night,
Yet the sky is black.

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I got bored.. and confused.

Stupid and pointless, right?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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