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Calamitous Indeed

It's funny looking back on how this all began,
Relationships with a boy of whom I was a fan,
Jealousy and determination brought us close,
Trauma and heartbreak made us love the other most.

The past year has been a roller coaster at best,
But our love has gotten us through all this mess.
If it were mine I'd give you the world,
To show the power of my love unfurled

I'd do what I could to make you smile,
To make your sadness go away for a little while.
If it would help I would sing you to sleep,
I've given you a piece of my heart to keep.

You're the best friend I could ever ask for,
Without a doubt it's you I adore.
So come away with me and let's dance a bit in the sun,
I promise I'll always try to make our days together fun.

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Calamitous Claws My KitKat

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  • Wrench-X
    November 10

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    I like this one plus I went up against it in the contest great write

    <3


  • Puked Up Pixie
    November 9
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    I loves my bestie...


  • Vhoori
    October 27

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    Aww! Raeven! This is so cute! But, hey, I thought I was your best frann!!!? I still love you anyways, Sunshine! I miss the hell out of you. And I don't have your number anymore.


    Your Moonbeam


  • ishelicious
    August 30
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    i like the background so nice

  • Puked Up Pixie
    August 20
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    I need your love

  • really nice job. It seems that with every day that passes your rhyme improves 100 fold. luck with the contest.

  • Rae Rae,

    This is a beautiful write. When you find a friend like the one mentioned in this poem you should hold on tight and fight to keep it. It is very sweet. Keep up the good work. I hope that ya win.


    Crystal

  • So I can't say anything because I'll just make myself cry...except that I love you.

    Always, Forever, and Equal.


    <3D~

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