Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Two Mirrors

Two mirrors
in a hall of hundreds:
one with your eyes,
one with his eyes,
nothing in between.

It seems the divisions
go beyond the classroom
into late-night cafes
and fraternal beds.

Did I dare sneak into
the Holy of Holies?
Perhaps not--
but I taste Temptation, still;
it aches beneath my skin.



Two mirrors
in a hall of hundreds:
one with you,
one with him,
and one, the one I look into,
the one without the other.

Author notes

This poem is about college romance, although I decided to give the theme a bit of a twist. It seems our protagonist cannot decide whether or not to give in to the more exploratory side of their nature, or to stick with what they already know.

I hope you enjoy.

A contest entry

Think about the poem.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • celestial
    August 4

    Edit | Reply
    I definitely enjoyed this! Full of college passion and emotion. I like how you ended it too. Thanks for sharing.