Endless amounts of banter
Pointless words
Wasted effort
And shattered hopes
“I can handle him, don’t you worry”
I thought I could
“I give as good as I get”
But maybe that act is starting to wear thin
I keep trying to reject you
Every girl has her limit
And this is starting to reach mine
I don’t want to ride this ferry ground with you anymore
I’m hanging onto moments that were
Remembering the people we used to be
Reminiscing about how it could have been
And trying to forget
Half hearted words
And a spider web
So full of complex lies
Even I’m left confused
I’m not saying this is the end, nor is it goodbye
But all I’m saying is I’m done with this
I’m done with half believing and half doubting
And I’m past caring about someone who obviously doesn’t care back.
Author notes
Urgh I know this is rubbish. There's just so much going on in my head and the words are there, I just can't put them to paper well. I'm just done with the whole stupid complex **** situation.
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I really like this piece. Amazing
and well written, things get
complicated but we get through
them, it proves our strengths.
Great write and keep scribbling -
wow this is amazing. i love the lines im done with half believing and half doubting. this has such a strong message, and i can relate to that feeling...going round in circles with a person. destructive and addictive. beautiful write
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I really like this..
"I’m hanging onto moments that were
Remembering the people we used to be
Reminiscing about how it could have been"
Those lines really got to me, well done..!
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thank you for your kind comment, its really appreciated
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Absolutely lovely
Raw emotions, are what makes poetry so great, and it's rare that poets express their true feelings anymore. Most just hide behind complex metaphores, and silly rhyme schemes, so it is lovely to see that you are pouring on, pure feelings, into this poem. Hope the complex situation won't last long, because after a while, it will get very tiresome for you.
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thank you
and thanks for the applause.
Oh the complex situation has been going on for an age - it's just boring now!
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This is really good, raw and just thoughts. It's good to get them out of your head, keep writing, maybe one day you'll come back and add on to it or change it. Great work (:
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