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War: Love or Hate

He makes you laugh
And he makes you cry
Being with him hurts your heart
But being with out him hurts even more
You can’t stop thinking about him
You hate him for that
Your heart beats so fast
That it hurts so bad
You love the way he says ‘I love you’
But is all of that really true.
Do you thank him for making you happy
Or do you hate him for hurting you so badly
Do you love him for making you smile
Or do you hate him for making you cry
I don’t think you can ever win
Its love or hate or maybe both
It’s your turn now
Let the game begin

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  • Animegirl- 17
    August 9
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    I love this! It is awesome and well written!