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perfect world?

she has been taking this world on
for sixteen years
growing up to be a beauty
but the world is trying to break her down
for you see her heart can never connect to another
it used to but now she doesnt even bother
becauses with her beauty came the envy
of others
trying to break her down
so she fell
she fell to a crack pipe
and held on tight
deciding it loved her
would never hurt her
but after a while the crack pipe brought friends
rape, prostitution, stds and crack babies
so now she lays there in the alley way shooting up, snorting
anything she can do
to get that high
to make her fly
to her this is her perfect world
to her the crack pipe will never hurt her.
because we did
we were never there when she needed us
we were never there to dry her tears
so she crumbled under the pressure.
and formed her own perfect world

idk where this came from it just came lol

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