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hell

burning me up
lies deceit

love you said

crimson hell are better words

A contest entry

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    August 4

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    I can see why you got HM this one hits home
    Hell is no matter where you are
    if you are tormented you are there
    well said hugs Angel♥


  • VelvetWings
    July 31
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    A nice write and contribution to the contest.
    Great take on the prompt.
    Best wishes and good luck~
    ~Sparrow


  • islekine gold member
    July 31
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    Thanks so much

    Best wishes always!

  • islekine gold member
    July 31
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    Finish please!

    thanks

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