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Total Delusion

He stands before the mirror with an invisible reflection

Petrified of the reality of total rejection

Mesmerized by the beauty who has captured his illusion

Hypnotized by the beast of total delusion

He gathers his thoughts yet he struggles to speak

Trapped by the essence of beauties mystique

Wishes and fantasies are all part of his dreams

Still the truth of reality are heard in his screams

Sobriety of sin has always been his quest

The search for salvation has been the ultimate test

Tempted by the insanity that has no conclusion

He's back in  his reality of total delusion

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  • lynda
    September 4
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    I CAN hear his screams...wow..so powerful


  • Shuberth
    August 1

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    this is great and the rhyme and the flow is awesome.
    got to read your write after a long time. hope everything is fine.

    Shuberth