Almighty god why cant I be a normal child?
Living in the streets
I am not even occupied.
Day after day I fear death
Knowing that I have already theft.
While the tears roll down my eyes
I raise both my hands up high and say
Oh! Dear god I cry so much
Knowing that I have lost my sense of touch.
I hope you wont leave me here alone
Because the shun has yet to shone
And my dog is still eating his bone.
It isn’t my fault that I always groan,
Or that I have a broken bone.
I know that I always yawn
It’s true you might have a phone.
but I’m just an innocent child
Who wants somebody to be with me,
who wont always moan.
Yes I am young
But I also have a tongue
And I have the right to speak up for myself
Just like yourself and everyone else.
Almighty god please don’t take my soul
Until I aim for my future goal.
What do you think about this poem I wrote with my sister???
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Good writing
Your poems get better and better (with practice). They always have a good message. You can become a great poet!
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Very touching and expressive, the only suggestions I have is check the spelling and Grammer and watch the rhyning. Some of it sounded a little forced in just a couple of places. But over all I really like it. Well done!
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This is very good... and it's very true... it's heartbreaking to know that children live like this... it's just the saddest thing to know and hear about... Keep up your amazing work!
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Really great poem, my favorite so far, keep writing
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I wrote this alone. am nearly 14
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very nice
good job kidd
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