Shattered rules lay in ruins
discarded in moments of ignorance.
Minutes of mayhem become days
playing mental delights
Spiral down
wake up, kick aside dusty past remains
Aim
fire.... sweet and pure
straight to this
broken...
waiting...
Circumstances petrified alive
by realities probing exsistance
grasping moral 'free for all'
the battle's on once more.
Author notes
this has come from weird thoughts of things i have gone thorugh in recent months
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Fantastic work here
Your emotions are deep and honest.
Well penned. It's nice to see some new work by you. You've been missed
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Thanks Cuz, and what a sweet thing to say, i have missed so many on here, including you a lot, i feel so glad to be back and looking forward to catching up on some reading and producing some more great reads for you guys
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Can't wait to see what you come up with.
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This feels exactly as the title describes, that ending was fabulous too, brought this piece together perfectly. Keep up the great writing. Best to you poet
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Thank you so much, a great comment
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it is so good to read your words again.
keep on writing your thoughts, I for one know it certainly helps.
Juls
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Thanks Juls im glad im writing again
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"Circumstances petrified alive
by realities probing exsistance
grasping moral 'free for all'
the battle's on once more."Super ending Cindy!
It's great to read your words again.
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thanx dad it feels great to be doing some writing again
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How's that precious young one?
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hes doing so great now Dad, is like 7 kilos lol, is only just behind a normal baby so they say she will definitely be caught up by 1yr old , she smiles and squels and plays with toys, so precious, nearly sitting. just recently started solids, so that has been a messy fun experience, she loves it , thats good
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