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Return to Me

Missing image

a little blue beyond the raging sea

the depths and miles are just too far to see

sweetest waters will brush the shores of fate

alone I will remain without my mate

 

tears are flowing and rolling down my cheeks

all emotions reaching their highest peaks

you're not here nor there, where is my lover?

across the seas and beneath clouds cover.

 

to love another would be quickly torn

for this lovers heart is already worn

giving you all there's none left to give

so to the rest I hope they can forgive

 

for across the sea is where my heart waits

doing so... til you return to the states

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  • penman gold member
    August 7

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    Excellent

    Such a beautiful write. And so very well written. Your words capture the images with great impact. Congratulations on the honorable mention


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 1

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    Wistful and tender love poem

    Lovely stuff

    Love
    Jeff