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Disbelief

Haunted by a reality that's not our dreams,
Torn by disbelief at our very seams;
We hide our tears and silence our screams,
Never truly realizing:

Life is never what it seems.

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Sometimes life is tough and its hard to tell other people your problems. It's very hard to keep troubled emotion inside, in hope that life will somehow bestow blessings of forgetfulness upon us. Well, don't expect life to get better by itself. Instead, do something that would make your life better, because "life is never what it seems."

And that's what this poem is about,
Silvos.

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  • Decorus Somnium
    October 12
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    I've always loved reading your works. There is something so realistic yet beautiful in them. Loving it!

  • Oh wow. That is a very powerful write. Great write!


  • Momma Goose
    July 31
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    poetry brings so much truth

    awesome.


  • LovesPlayToy
    July 31

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    wow i havent commmented on your poems in ofrever! but this one is wow! this is amazing! so much feeling in such little words!! u are true artists with your words

  • <3

    This was beautiful. Thought Provoking and a little sad. If you ever need to talk, please talk to me. btw....

    Your love is like.........WOAH!

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