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Passionate Sounds

The earth seeks again
this time with fake music seems like
frail bones and high cheek bones
no longer sound as beautiful
eyes that can contain a world
where all beauty can fit there
he looked at me the way art does
entincing me with emotions
excellence in his mascualinty
the joy of sex embracing me
could leave my heart pregant
with love again
but noone can see what
colors that sing
shades of notes
the earth falls within me
with the sound from his eye
then leaves your heart
shaken by the noise
soundless
as something dances
in the soul

My love that finds me
his eyes speaks my name
to love what he does to me
would take forever
catch underneath the touch
of his gaze
it's pure sexy
quoted from nature himself

and I wanted to play him
like what he played for me
just to watch the notes
winter in my ears
cascade behind my backbone
alone just wanted to be alone
that day

beauty so clear and spoken
when she does need to talk
but when she doesn't
beauty isn't there

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  • World So Cold
    October 24
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    ^w^


  • DogFish silver member
    October 24

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    oh! relasionships are so hard!

    I hope this was at least a catharsis for you
    ...poetry can't be much more than that in these cases, by my mind!