Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Soulmate (vampire)

Vampire, Vampire,
Where could you be?
I've been searching for you in all of my dreams,
Your beauty, your grace, is hiding it seems,

Then one night, you appeared,
The danger of you became so clear,
You looked at me through demon eyes,
Eyes so beautiful that they themself were a lie,

It was the end of my searching,
The beginning of life,

You just walked right in,
Going deeper, and deeper in to my mind,
Touching the depths of my heart,

You made me fall in love as you played your cunning tricks,
I bet you never thought it'd end up like this?
For I am just the prey,
Nothing more am I,

Though when we touched something happened,
You touched my hand,
I fell into you,
You and I both knew,
We were one,
From then on, we could not live with out the other,

You were made for me,
and I for you,
Now and forever soulmates and more,

Your lips touched mine and it felt so right,
Your fangs peirced my neck and there was no more light,
I was not dead, but I was inside your mind,
I know every secret,
I know every little detail of your everlasting life,
and you know everything I've hidden in my time.

You accept me,
I accept you,
Soulmates forever,
Until death do I part.

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • deeply.desturbed
    September 15
    Edit | Reply
    it kindaq reminds me of twilight...that a good thing, i loved that book!


  • Night FireWolf
    September 7
    Edit | Reply
    Interesting. If only us vampires had fangs. lol.


  • xeroabyss II
    August 13
    Edit | Reply
    Reminds me of the movie Vampire D: Bloodlust.
    Good movie, good poem too.

  • beautiful, and enchanting, but somehow it just didn't have that OMG moment where i felt the emotion through it. i think it has a lot of potential and it truly is beautifully written. i love how you wrote about searching forever ... i know how that feels lol
    anyway thanks for the entry!