“Blow away with me” she whispers,
It’s the voice of an angel,
You know you must follow,
Only then when you’re down her path,
She’s revealed and you see what’s behind the angel mask,
A girl with beauty beyond compare,
Deathly sexy in her features,
Protruding hip bones,
Piano ribs,
She’s got the beauty that you’re trying to get,
She whispers once more,
“Blow away with me,”
You follow her every move,
Soon enough you see yourself,
You’re soul is floating above,
You body lays there lifeless on the floor,
You did what she said,
She settled the score,
You now have her beauty,
Her power of trickery,
You now whisper the most tempting words, “Blow away with me”.
A contest entry
- 1000 Titles. by Antebellum.
550 points, ended August 13, 90 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very twisting...in a good way. I have felt this way about a girl before. Girls have a power over boys, and boys will listen to anything they say. In the end its a death trap. good write!
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This was a great write, oh the evil grip of ana has a hold on more then we know. She befrends us and leads us astray, convinces us we need her, only for her to leave us to our own demise. I wish it was easier said then done, I would get rid of her, but she will always be there, even when we think she is gone, she will always be there naggung at us.. Good luck to you!
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I really like how you repeat the title.
'blow away with me' it adds to it, makes it a bit more personal i believe.
thanks for taking the time to enter,
good luck
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