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Until You

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Love walked out the door
And my heart went with it
Hours passed
Time passed
And my heart didn't return
Until you did...

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  • Momma To Be
    August 1

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    This is awful. Its way to short. "Hours passed Time Passed" - Last time i checked hours were time so duh time passed


    • Wild Mustang
      August 17
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      Or maybe you're just to uncreative to appreciate poetry. No fucking kidding time passed if hours did. But sometimes when you're waiting for something, it's hard to sum up into hours. Because your heart can't make sense of it that way. It's just time.

      If you're going to write garbage comments, do it somewhere else.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 31
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    Aww, this is so sweet!