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Your Eyes ( an original song)

(Verse 1)When I see your face

my problems go away

when you look into my eyes

there's nothing I can say

when you're right beside me

there's nothing I can't see

that's when I realize

you're the only part of me


Chorus(hook): Look through your eyes and see

your soul soooo deep

and there's not much I can say

when you look at me that way

Look through your eyes and see

your soul soooo deep

and you finally found the key

the way you hypnotise me

with

your eyes

your eyes

your eyes

with

your eyes

your eyes

your eyes


(Verse 2)Love in your eyes

passion and surprise

oh, I'd like to know

where it is you go

when you stare into my soul

and bound into my heart

your look melts all the cold

and sets my heart-beat off (Chorus)

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