perhaps gray suits me i say as you stare into my eyes and seemingly wonder why
they have coordinated themselves with the dreary storm clouds around us
you seem to be confused by what some like to call beauty and in this moment i laugh
it seems you believe that my eyes are simply an illusion designed to mesmerize
but dear trust me they are nothing of the sort, if you love me there is no trickery
baby i would never do that to you, cause you may not know it, but honey i love you too
maybe you are the one that is misleading, maybe you are the one that is an illusion
it it i that am fooled by you in your masculine beauty, and you say that i am
mysterious maybe but, baby you have no idea
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A contest entry
- Rhyme,Lyrics, Prose, Dirty Pretty. by Antebellum.
800 points, ended September 24, 290 entries
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'mysterious maybe baby you have no idea'
Love this ending. It you place a comma after mysterious and add 'but' if would read better. Like,
Mysterous, maybe but baby you have no idea.
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