You left me crying an begging you not to go,
But then u walk back in an expect things to be ok.
You left me breathless so many times,
An now your playing my heart once again.
Telling me you still love me an miss me,
Telling me you sorry, hoping I’ll listen.
Breaking into my heart, an bringing it all back,
I listen to you voice while they replayed in my mind.
I whisper, so u dont hear me
"Please come back I’ll always love you"
I feel it all over again, it kills me more,
Because you’re no longer here, an no longer want to be.
You say you do but is that really true?
Fighting hard against you even though I want you back,
I know it’s the only way, because if u see it then you’ll use me for a fall back.
I cried so many tears wanting you to come back,
An wasted so many sleepless nights.
You were my lover an my best friend,
An I lost it all when u walked out the door.
I tried to close it, but as it came closer u slipped your fingers in the crack.
Working you way back into my life,
You are giving me the reason to smile once again.
An never once did I say it,
I haven’t given in, but I want to so bad.
Just know that i'll always love you no matter what.
But i need more than a
"I'm sorry i did you wrong"
give me your honest opinion
Comments
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Awesome write here, it's sort of funny how people can just take our hearts and we are happy to let them. Then suddenly they throw it out of the car window on their way to get a new one. You did wonderful expressing yourself here, a very deep and heart felt write!
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well first off I am impressed you took my help and utilize dit in this write from you and you structured it very well. any ways with that beings aid I felt that you poured yourself into this write and yet you were kind of venting a bit of anger through out this poem in pieces here and there. I also got the feeling that as much as you love her and want to be with her again that as you state din the end sorry isn't going to cut it and she needs to reprove her loyality to you. any ways overall this is a brilliant well penned write from you and I love the beauty and depth you poured forth into your poem here as well. any ways nice work all round & keep up the good work as always. Hopefully things will work out for the best for you.
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