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All Over The Map

Peeking, awaiting, what's to come?

Never could know the days ahead

long ago...still asked the same

Mind is ready, tied regrets of before
Body was always there to scorn
Spirit could never heal or carry a tune
It is only for so long, until they realize your through

Claustrophobic with people/friends
I hated them, yet they cling, gone are ones that made me laugh
Systematic...I said it again

Witness acknowledged a cynic's joke
Has made him laugh and cry hysterically

Never knows best until curtain call

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