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I don't know

dear amanda,
here's a story
quite unheard to many ears
a tale of a love surpassing the expected time lapse
but a wonderful tale all the same

he's that guy no girl can stand
and I'm the girl who pushes them all away
but together we're destiny
a love beginning at an age so young
an age where love was not meant to thrive
but still it did within us

we fought to maintain it together
when all the odds pointed against us
when everyone said it wouldn't last
we still made it through

long fields seperated us
as we were forced to seperate for a decade's half
but our hearts remained intact
never letting go of who we were
and now here we stand

it's a wedding song sung anew
its a new beginning for us all
a romance that started at the twelfth year of life
now surpassing into eternal light

so that's the tale I've come to live
thats the story I've come to love
that's me
and that's him
forever the same
forever in love

-Laura Kennedy

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  • AutumnsFlame
    September 8

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    Beautiful! It's refreshing to see an entry in this contest that isn't sad. I'm glad you're in love and you're loving life! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • iWritePoems
    July 30
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    very beautiful poem...