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Under my skin

I've gotta be honest
I'm losing sleep
Now you're under my skin

I wait up past One
Two and Three AM
Until I collapse under sheer exhaustion
Because you're under my skin

You've made me worry
Which is bad for me
Because I never do
But you've managed it
Now you're under my skin

It kinda burns my soul
Eats away at me
That I can't help my dear friend
Natalie

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