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Is it Over?

this isn't happening again
life turns over in her hand

how could she do this?

is it over?
can we start over?

icy stares and spicy tongues
disregard and ruin her name
she hides her face within her arms
hides her disgrace, hides her shame

flitting around the edges mark
so lightly ever dancing
lighter than air, the consequence severe
of playing with romancing
of falling without a care

is it over yet?

she doesn't care, she doesn't know
doesn't understand defeat
or how far down she'll go
love her now or forget forever
this girl of fantasies
let her die inside her mind, alone
maybe she'll wake up and see

it's all over

Author notes

I used more than one picture...I hope that's okay.

http://zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Forgotten-Fairytales-58397032
http://vampire-zombie.deviantart.com/art/Taste-of-spring-98276037
http://girltripped.deviantart.com/art/Water-Ballet-81871761

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  • icy stares and spicy tongues
    disregard and ruin her name
    she hides her face within her arms
    hides her disgrace, hides her shame

    flitting around the edges mark
    so lightly ever dancing
    lighter than air, the consequence severe
    of playing with romancing
    of falling without a care


    You chose some great pictures, I loved the way you formed this with your words.
    Thanks for entering this