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Rainy Day Ballet

Tennis shoes are quite alright
for ballet in the rain
The ground so slick and beautiful,
your tip toes can sustain
Your gracefulness reflected
in the mirror of the street
The coolness of the rain
has dispelled the summer heat
So leap around and twirl today
for no one can compare
To how you look in Converse
with raindrops in your hair

Author notes

http://Zaratops.deviantart.com/art/after-it-rains-114563553
I know you prefer prose, but my strength is rhyme
I liked all the pictures, but this one just inspired this quick little write.
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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    October 9

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    So very light and enchanting!!! I adored this ballet so!

    Very nicely written!



    Az

  • So leap around and twirl today
    for no one can compare
    To how you look in Converse
    with raindrops in your hair

    I loved this, converse are my favorite shoes and I love that picture as well, this piece was great!!! Thanks so much for entering it


  • Garmond gold member
    August 4

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    It really is always such a pleasure to read you. This is just super cute and bring coloured splashes to minds eye... frivolous fun and giggles.
    Rhythm and rhyme in perfect harmony.