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Slowly Breaking

She wants to walk away.
She's fed up.

The arguing to much.
She just can't take it anymore.
She loves him way to much,
He slowly breaks her.
But the fighting passes,
And a new day dawns.
And looking at his sleeping face,
She could never leave.

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  • Hi

    This poem is beautiful N i loved the way it was written n how its formed. Please keep da ink flowing Ure work is amazing. Alsome job on this poem.. Hope ure doing okai and all. Sori i havent been in touch I have been busi n goin through alot myself but im hangin in there though. U do the same cause its going to get better..

  • you don't deserve this.
    hope things get better.

    This is really good!