I can hear your voice
But it doesn’t stop the pain
How can I not get you out of my mind?
Whatever happens I’ll be right here waiting for you
No matter how long it takes
I took for granted all the times
Couldn’t imagine us apart
I hear the laughing
I taste the tears
But I cant see you
Now I’m going crazy
Just remember I’ll be right here waiting for you
No matter how long it takes
Stay by your side
Waiting all life
Right here waiting for you
In the end if I’m right with you
I’ll take the tears
I’ll keep the laughs
Never leave your side
Cant you see I’m nothing without you
I’ll be right here waiting for you…
Right here waiting for you
A contest entry
- Song Titles by Girl With Guitar.
700 points, ended August 6, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I did actually write the title as "Right Here Waiting" and I didn't include the "For You" for a reason. I also find that this piece is too close to the actual song lyrics. I did mention in the contest brief to try not be inspired by the song's lyrics, but just the title, that way there is a larger span of possibilities for the poem.
There are however some good lines throughout this so I thank you for the entry.
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