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The pain inside

I used to be able
to let all of my
hurt out. When I
was angery I
could express it,
when I was hurt
I could feel it,
when I needed to
cry I could just
let it go.

Ever sinse the woman
left me I haven't
been able to do
anything. I thougt
I loved her,
but now I'm not sure
what it was I felt.

When we were together
the time would just
fly by. Then she
told me that she only
wanted to be friends.
I was hurt, but I
diddn't cry.

Everything just stayed
inside. Nothing would
come out. Now I don't
even see her anymore.
She just fadded away.
And here I am stuck in
this rotten mood trying
to be passive but really
I hurt.





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  • This is full of sadness. You need to express yourself some how. You say you can't cry, why?
    Crying is an emotion that expresses sadness; are you sad she went away? Do you think you really loved her? I mean did she make your heart flutter, give you sweaty palms? I think your sadness is causing you your anger.

  • Sadness